nice
Hey i kinda like the Aah in the song. And the simple melody. Latley i also been getting queit good at making melodies :P
I also like rising drums sounds cool.
But good job overall i can hear that you indeed did your best to make this. But dont you think you should try to use diffrint synths. Because i noticed that you use the same insrtuments in all of your songs. Wich is nothing wrong with that. But it could be dangerous that way you risk your songs to sound the same. Ofcourse they have a diffrint structure and melody, but you understand what i mean? right?
Anyways Good! And i hope that i helped in any way :)